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PhilipMyers

  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: my mind

    I absolutely loved your poem! The way you capture the chaos and beauty of thoughts is so relatable. It reminded me of a time when I felt overwhelmed yet inspired ...

    Aug 26


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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