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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Old Clown

    This has the makings of a great poem, and the concept is interesting. It's just the grammer and punctuation which lets it down, so I would work on that. Good ...

    Sep 23, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Water

    Lovely poem! I especially liked the first verse..and the clever little twist at the end. :D Good job :wink:

    Sep 23, 2007


These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world.
— Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah