PhoenixXander

Thank you! :3

Thanks for point out the sister and the suffocation things! (:

Ah, the one at the beginning was a mistake, opps, thanks for pointing it out! The others are ends of stanzas but I can not figure out how to put ...

What I've learned from poetry is there is no wrong way to use grammar, honestly.

I add a new stanza, after the fourth, hopefully that helps a little. I wanted to focus more on remembering, but I guess that works out!

I myself am transgender also, and this day makes me so emotional. I decided to pay tribute to those of us who have fallen with this poem. Thank you for ...

Awe, lucky! That's totally radical, congratulations to him. (: