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Re: Typo Alley~A: Part One
Heya, r4! Chrissy here for a review! A couple nitpicks, that's all. I as the Author can do anything I want in this story. It's supposed to be... I, as ...
Dec 21, 2014 -
Re: (untitled) Chapter Two (part two)
Hey, Snazzy! Chrissy here for a review. Couple of nitpicks. "Sorry." Frostpaw said, and crouched into a battle stance. You're supposed to put a comma instead of the period at ...
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: Brother Beaver
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! First things first, I'd like to say that I love the idea. Two beavers arguing and talking like humans! And the whole thing about ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Me.1.
Chrissy here for a review! Me let the men and women swarm around him, walking around with their everyday business. Maybe something beside Walking around. Makes me think of walking ...
Dec 14, 2014 -
Re: Alien.1.
Chrissy here for a review! I don't have very long, but I will do what I can. His hoodie covering his hidden scared face, as he lifted his head to ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: French Hens and the Spirit (Part 3 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Chrissy here for a review! I love the idea. You turned Santa and Mrs. Claus into a modern family! I can almost see them arguing. Nice elves! Definitely not the ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)
Hey, Chrissy here. This is my first review, so sorry if I get anything wrong. Weaving pictures of faraway lands, of majestic characters, of happy endings. Would that be And ...
Dec 11, 2014