PiesAreSquared

Thanks! Will correct this. My edits are piling up haha!

Hurmm. I never noticed all those errors. Especially the punctuation type. If I press space twice it becomes a period. Will correct them and thank you very much, Mess

These things will be edited. Although I like sentence fragments in the actual writing, when it's purposeful, so I'm keeping that.

Thanks olive! I do mean azure flows from the glass castles falling onto the red grass.

Thanks! Argh so many options! I'm not sure exactly which to use now! But I'm leaning towards your suggestion.

Thank you my love. I will think on a better word and edit it in soon!

Yes! I edited them! Check out those without he {reacted} tag!

I say, therefore I am a horrible writer. I need the prologue because I will be writing the same went from Aley's point of view near the end of the ...

I'm going to focus this on Aley rather than Fate. I like Aley anyway! I might, marry her? I don't know. So Aley grew up in an absentee father environment, ...

I just knew my plot was bad! I shall spend this week in rewriting the entire thing. Hopefully it will get better and not worse! I'm not sure I understand ...

Chins doesn't say anything at all after Ry comes onto the scene. I do love to write. I'm just not in love with my horrible writing! Not this week anyway! ...

Indeed

Alright I hopped onto my computer to do some editing. So i fixed those typos and stuff. I got the "I" starters fixed. :P All the memories are Fates, if ...

My asap wasn't exactly...fast but doe means done

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