Pippiedooda

I liked that! I thought the metaphor was very beautiful, it was a very moving story, very sad. The rose was a good image to use as it is wordly ...

I liked the plot to the story and the contrast between two perspectives on what happened, i do have some comments though. The beginning is very frantic and although its ...

I liked how the story played out and want to know what happens next! The basic outline of the story is good, there are just some spelling mistakes and connectives ...

Hi i'm new here so sorry if i'm not that helpful. I really liked your story, I thought how the beggining jumps straight into the scene really worked and enough ...

I'm new here and don't have very much experience in critisizing other peoples work, so I'm sorry if I don't offer much help! I thought that the idea and how ...