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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pruning Weeds on Cedar Mulch; Life is Unfair

    Hi Aley, So I really like this poem, I think that there is great imagery here. What I feel this poem lacks is coherence. It's beautifully disconnected. There is this ...

    Jun 15, 2014


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines