PixieStix

Hey, Pix here to review! I must say...Wow. This was amazing. The way you entered lots of detail into this peice was very good. I'm not good at reviewing prologues ...

Hey! Pixie here to review as requested. :D I really like this poem. It's different, which is a quality of a good writer. The way you expressed the sea, and ...

Hey Persy! I'm here to review your poem. :D This peice is one of my favorites I've read all week. You very much described how your great grandfather looks, feels, ...

This was really good. It helped me alot. Thanks! : ) I've had writers block for a week now.

Hey, Pix here. : ) I'm not very good at reviewing prologues but lets give it a try shall we? First of all, I think you should break this up ...

Rocky...Alright. As requested: Okay, while I was reading this, it really reminded me of my old doggie, Bo. I like how you peiced it in a story, how you kept ...

Hey wordandwishes! I feel I've reviewed some other works of yours on here--though I don't remember. I'll review this peice for you. I like how you started off in this ...

AJ! Pix here to review one of your poems. Or songs. Lol. Okay so here it goes.... I really like how you put emotion into this. You know, you didn't ...

This was really good. I like how it talked about a story, and how things start swell but then end like crap. To be honest, things like this happen all ...

Hey! Pix here to review! I'mma edit and review this- BOLD Is my editing. If I died yesterday , You would be indifferent , Because you wouldn’t of known me. ...

Hey! Here to review! I like this. Alot, actually. It was somehwat depressing, though I enjoyed it either way. I'm guessing Bret and Brandon are the people your writing about ...

Hey! Pix here to review! This is amazing, actually. Very, very good. :) I think this is emotional and very touching. The girl commited suicide, most people don't write about ...

Hey! Pix here to review! Alright. SO I don't usually do prologues but lets give it a shot. :) When I clicked this, I expected it to be in paragraph ...

This was very detailed. Very detailed. I just stopped by to say it's REALLY good. Keep up the writing. :D ~Katie.

Hey! Pix here to review! This was good, just I think you should break it apart like so- "Bridgid awakens, her hands bound, to find Brian staring at her with ...