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  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Till Sunrise

    Hi Evermore. Your story listing in the Green Room really intrigued me because it reminded me of a popular book that’s out right now called You’ve Reached Sam, which also ...

    Dec 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Romantic Re: A Dangerous World

    Hi NothingMore905. Below are a few thoughts I’d like to share with you after reading your piece: The message in your first paragraph is intriguing; the world protecting itself from ...

    Dec 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Letter Between Journeys

    Hi Liminality. I don’t normally review poems because it’s not my strong suit but I was intrigued by yours. The text design of your poem is very eye-catching and gives ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Imagine

    Hi Dipro. I don’t usually review poetry because it is not my strong suit but I was intrigued by yours and I wanted to share some of my thoughts after ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: A most peculiar Christmas…

    Hello Vampricone. I was intrigued by your story because I don’t see the Christmas horror trope very often. When I read your introduction describing the background of “Laughing Jack” I ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: MY DEAR FRIEND.

    Hi Jisrahinav. I'd like to share some thoughts after reading your story. Overall impression: You employ a surreal use of immersive prose. The story is enigmatic with limited context on ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: second best - chapter one: a rocky start

    Hi Julianna. I’m here with some thoughts I’d like to share after reading your first chapter. As you alluded to in the beginning, I have a few recommendations for improvement ...

    Dec 14, 2022
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Warm Embrace

    Hi Elli. This story felt like a warm embrace, peeling back layer after layer of the protagonist’s fondest memories. Before I delve into my overall thoughts of your story there ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Our Tune

    Hi Johnny. After reading your story, I have a few thoughts I wanted to share with you. Spoiler alert: I really liked it. Providing exposition in the beginning about how ...

    Dec 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Lady Alberta and the Missing Prince (Part 3)

    Hello Plume. The finale I've been looking forward to but took way too long to finally read and review. Let's do this! ** I am going to review a little ...

    May 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Fallen King: Prologue

    Hey MaybeAndrew. I have read some of your other pieces before and I am excited to discover that you've been writing a novel. Let's dive into this review shall we! ...

    May 2, 2022
  • Art » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Arrival

    Hi Pandacow. First off, interesting username - pandas are definitely one of the coolest animals in existence. Okay, onto the review! I like how you start the story off in ...

    May 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: To Sit on the Edge of the Moon

    Hi Yellow Sweater. I do not typically review poetry but your title immediately captured my eye and after reading it I definitely have some thoughts. Your descriptions are ethereal and ...

    Apr 30, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Whale Hunting on Saturn

    Hi MaybeAndrew. As an April Fool's joke this story had extensive depth, so much so it could submerge a thousand Sun whales (excuse my sad attempt at punny humor). Onto ...

    Apr 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i am always writing about stars

    Hi WaywardxWanderer. I am completely entranced by this piece, the title of which having initially intrigued me because I too admire the stars. I am not used to reviewing poems ...

    Apr 25, 2022


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein