Poison

I'm sorry I don't have time for a line-by-line critique, but I will give a few comments. First, your opening paragraph. It doesn't really hook me. Telling me what she ...

I meant on YWS. 9/10. It's very deep. I like it.

You know you're a nerd when the teacher holds up your test and says "All hail the nerd, for she got a 104 out of 100!" Oh yeah, that happened ...

8/10. Interesting...very interesting....

I love it. 10/10. I laughed for at least a minute and a half. Question: Is anyone on here close to legally blind?

I give you a 7/10. You have Michael Jackson and Billy-Ray Cyrus on there, showing me you appreciate dated music (Even though they really aren't extremely old). I like FOB, ...

My Last Breath - Evanescence If you care, enjoy. If you don't know who Evanescence is, try her out. *Walks out of the room with a thoughtful look on her ...

Are you suggesting you're not keeping secrets?

Sorry I couldn't get to this earlier, d@ydre@mer!! I promise to do better next time. (corrections are in bold) This is a story I wrote last year, to be more ...

Hi! I'm Poison, and I'm also fairly new to this site. You'll like YWS. Everyone here is very nice. I see that everything has been said, but I wanted to ...

Okay, so this is my first official post. Please, tear it apart! Be brutally honest about your thoughts and critiques! :smt001 Chapter One This was it. This was the moment ...

Alright, here we go. When I was a young girl, I had dreams of romance and love. Though when i capitalize was 15 Comma. (Write out the word "fifteen" to ...

Okay, I promised a crit. So here we go. (Okay, if you read this and are totally lost, that is because you haven't reread chapters four and five. They are ...

Crit ticket. Sorry that I can't do it now. :)

8/10. Funny, and kind of true. Plus, I like quotes.