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  • Other Poetry Re: No Heartbeat Detections

    To be honest I don't get it. It sounds nice and has good language and flow but I just don't understand. Then again I only read it quickly. Nice work. ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hide from the Artificial Sun

    Great poem!

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Frustration.

    My gramar isnt very good. Sorry about that. Thanks for your comments!

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Frustration.

    Um... It like walking on ice, in socks. Like singing, without the words. Its like losing the remote, to a little brother. Like the itch, always needing a scratch. It’s ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Envy

    Confident, you talk to her. Leaving me in the background, forced to decipher your endless inside jokes, that I wish I was in on. And while you two sit laughing ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: 11:11 11/11/11

    Wow! This poem is amazing and so are you. I am usually put off by long poems but this one drew me in and had me hooked till the very ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unraveled Memories

    This was a very nice poem. Well thought out and brilliantly executed. Dance around the bloody roses Veil your face in the thicket of lies I love this line! Good ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Truth About Love

    Hey. I don't have time to write a long review so all I will say is 1. Great poem! 2. It should be "Was just a dumb jock." It flows ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Favorite poets...?

    Lewis Carroll is brilliant when it comes to humorous poems I think. I also love Robert Frost, Shakespeare, Dylan Thomas and T.S. Elliot. I dislike Anon.

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Balliant beauty

    Hi. This my first attempt at writing using Elizabethan language. Tell me what you think. O briny queen! O balliant lady! My cup of luck! It doth brim with plenty ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: In the dead of night.

    This is by no means a masterpiece and it's not meant to be one. I just wrote a simple poem while eating breakfast. Tell me what you think. A blank ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Celeste

    This is great! Its one of those poems that stands out because of its unique qualities. This poem will go far. First of all, I love your structure. I love ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Life Story

    Fantastic poem! I loved every bit. What am I in this sea of life? Am I unique? Or am I common? Many people filled with strife Ask this boring question ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Outward Bound

    I want to write a long review for this so i can get lots of points but all I can say is BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Our future

    Nice!

    Nov 10, 2011


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