Pompadour

Hey, Wiz! Before I begin, I apologise if this review is harsh. I honestly do see a lot of potential in this, considering you wrote this during a word war, ...

Hoi, Sparky~ It is late here and I have class tomorrow, but I liked this and I thought I'd drop by for a quick review. Pls ignore typos; I'm on ...

Hey, Moony~ Back for more! So, my first exclamation will probably be 'all the clichés!' It has now been affirmed that that was my first exclamation. I like what you're ...

Hullo. Happy Review Day! I'll make this short. You have a list of characters. Good. You know what they look like. Also good. You have the barebones of a plot ...

'Rora, hello! I'm finally here~ Happy Review Day! Let's make this a quick review, yeah? Right, so I'm really enjoying your writing so far. I'm horrible at praise, but you ...

Back for 1.2! Happy Review Day~ In the first line you have 'arms' and 'arm' in quite close vicinity to one another, which creates a teensy bit of repetition--I'd suggest ...

Hi. Happy Review Day~ First off, you have a typo in the title. c: 'Critism' ought to be spelled 'criticism'. Secondly, I'm going to talk about capitalisation. Normally, I don't ...

Hullo, Moony! Happy Review Day~ I'll get to straight to pushing my teeth in this chapter, then. So, to be honest, while I'm really fond of the concept you've got ...

Hey, Neverland~ Pomp here for a review! Happy Review Day! Let's make this quick. The first paragraph was decent enough to draw me in; you varied sentence length and the ...

Hello! Pomp here to leave a quick review~ Welcome to YWS! My first critique is going to be your handle on language. You have a masterful way of describing the ...

Howdy, Auxii! Finally here to review~ Happy Review Day! (Also, I'm typing this out on a phone; pls ignore typos.) So, I'm going to reiterate what Blues said about removing ...

Hey, Gray~ Pomp here for a quick review! So, the first thing that needs to be tackled in this poem is flow. Like, tackle it pronto, please, because the poem ...

Hey, Iron! Here for The Big Review. You've already gotten some very solid reviews on this piece, so the criticism I will be leaving will be mostly general~ I'll try ...

Hey, Anci! This is a The Big Review review~ Disclaimer: this is also a phone review; don't step on the typos. I'm going to try to keep this short. I ...

Hey, megsug! Pomp here for The Big Review . So, I'm going to begin with critiquing your first paragraph. I hesitate to pull chunks out, but although the first couple ...