Poppi

Fish aren't martyrs though are they? Fish are just FAT! teehee - glad you like it

Ok just you wait for this one. The fish is coming to town!!

Ah good. Some people can be hellova mean about this sort of thing. Last time I batted an eyelid there was Cornwall Rape and Sexual Abuse after me!! Had to ...

Sure have! ;)

That's fine - we all get grumpy sometimes :D (sorry for post-padding - couldn't resist!!)

That's more like it! Thanks for that - didn't know what angle you were coming from (hoped it wasn't the "SEE A PSYCHIATRIST NOW!" angle lol...)

That's fine - we all get grumpy sometimes :D

Sorry guys - missed that part of the rules! I'll rate them from now on. Thought everyone here was 13+ you didn't offend me Twinkly Person I just get REALLY ...

Is that meant to be a good comment or bad one? I didn't ask for critique on my life. Poems are words. Just read the words.

The first verse is really nice but I like the second one best - adds depth "Love is living, self is dying" - do you mean self is dying because ...

That's mean! I don't want it rated! I totally don't believe in rating stuff... I mean people are in charge of what they read... I coulda dealt with it at ...

How the hell do I rate my own poem? It's not up to me whether it's good or not!

Is the patronising book that horrid one about the teenage pregnancy you had to read that I read too that's like eeeeeew and is all patronising and crappity? *list rolls ...