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Re: CandyLand Chapter 2 (Restart)
Thanks, I do need to work on my description.
Nov 3, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Four
No problem, thank you for clarifying. I make sur to bring a dictionary next time XD, jk. I like your writing so keep it up.
Oct 24, 2016 - Re: Death Mage Chapter Four Oct 23, 2016
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Re: Hestia's Hearth: Chapter 2, An eye for detail
No problem
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: The Case of Schadel H. Kueper - Chapter 1 - Part I
Hey Mage, Your very welcome for the review and I'll make sure to "hit that like button"!
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Three
Thx
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter Three
When I press one the link it says that you have made it for your eyes only.
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4
kk
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4
No problem, let me know when you write the next chapter.
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: Richard & Rebecca: Chapter One -The Frozen Sun-
I really don't have anything to say about this work. I just hope to see you complete it. Keep up the good work. Your friend, Poseidon
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Candy Land Ch. 1 (Restart)
I thank you for this review. I actually like the way you review, it makes me think more about what I am writing. You'll (hopefully) learn more about Annabeth as ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Storytime: The Tale of a Teller Who Never Wanted One. Prologue
I don't even have anything to say, the prologue is just lovely. You make a type of mystic atmosphere that is already lulling me into the story. Keep up the ...
Oct 18, 2016 -
Re: CandyLand Chapter 2 (Restart)
Here's Chapter one and thanks for your suggestions. Also their not paranoid because there with the two men, now in chapter 3 youll see things a bit differently.
Oct 17, 2016 -
Re: Liberation
" I arrive back at my room. I grab all my supplies I packed earlier, as well as a few other things. I dress in my uniform, a black, army ...
Oct 14, 2016 -
Re: Candy Land Ch. 1 (Restart)
I edited it again, but it won't be clear till the next chapter.
Oct 14, 2016