Princess

Great job! I really loved reading this poem! It was short and sweet and to the point. There were a few bits that bugged me though. The brushing of your ...

Wow! Day, this is awesome! I totally loved it! I will point out a few things that need fixing. They all had multiple colored hair, Keyan’s was blonde and black, ...

Hey Mikkah! Welcome to the YWS family! So what are your favorite things to write? Personally, I am a huge sucker for poetry, and I love to write it.. I'm ...

Okay guys.. I know there are tons of you who are having major writing block. I know I am.. Poetry all depends upon which mood you are in. You have ...

I'd love to star in a movie.. Im an obsessed actress! Would you rather have all the publishers trash your book and refuse to publish any of your work, or ...

These poems are very good.. I enjoyed them. There were a few parts that I must point out though. Firstly, if you rhyme two lines, then keep up the rhyme ...

Brick by brick, these walls are coming down. Dust filled air clogs my lungs, am I breathing? I cough, sputter, and gag again, feeling the gritty texture in my mouth. ...

Banned for having the unlucky number 13 at the end of your name.

Okay guys.. I am having some difficulties for picking pieces to review.. I love to review all poetry and Romantic fiction.. Any takers? I will also review any pieces and ...

8/10 for being awesome!

.......*stares* okay then... Banned for confusing me!

Banned for banning me!

Banned for having a confusing sig!

Chirantha!!!! :shock: Me and Thunder_dude7 Nate and Mesh Snoink and Incandescence (I apologize for my poor spelling)

That's true.. Sorry if i sounded harsh before.. My parents have nailed strict values into my poor unguarded head.