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Re: Shattered
Thank you all for taking time to review my poem; I really appreciate it! Juniordame and niteowl, I agree, it does sound better without the second "I". Thank you for ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: In the Light Of.
This was great! It was very interesting and flows very nicely, and I can't see anything wrong with it! Keep this up, I would love to read more from you!:D ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Tiger, Tiger
This is great! This is a fine example of a powerful and intense poem. My only criticism is that you need to be careful when using 'it's' and 'its' Other ...
Dec 17, 2008