Pruthvi

Well written, i must say. Thoughts are perfectly put into wordings and that makes a good poet. I personally loved it. especially the last 5 lines changed my whole perspective ...

Firstly I appreciate your suggestions as it has given me a space for improvement. As it was my first poem written I needed someone like you to point out the ...

Thank you Lubbeljl, I'll surely take into consideration all of your suggestions in my next writeup.

I personally enjoyed reading it. keep going! beautifully written