PsychicNinja

I liked this one. If I let go, even a little bit. For some reason, when I think of 'holding on' and 'letting go'...'a little bit' doesn't quite fit there...maybe ...

Guess who's finally gonna crit your stuff???? lol Critting as I go, bro: But before he neared the Ghosts, a group of Banshee fliers came to intercept him and his ...

Hello! I'm going to crit this as I read it: I walked up to Tsunade's paper covered desk. If you wanna say it this way, I think that 'paper' and ...

Hello, again. ^_^ A few weeks ago I read Star Wars: Darth Bane-Path of Destruction, a Old Republic novel, by Drew Karpyshyn. This book was about Darth Bane, obviously. It ...

Hello. Recently, I read another (gasp) Star Wars book, which was actually a collection of short stories which were previously published in the Star Wars Adventure Journal. Tales from the ...

Hey all. I just finished reading this great book called Lone Survivor. It was pretty awesome. It's by Marcus Luttrell, a Navy SEAL. Okay, this book is about Navy SEAL ...

I fixed it so now there are compound sentences and that part isn't so random. :D :D ~Timea

Domo arigato, Joel and Audra! :D Jonin is like Genin, Joel, 'cause its a title and a rank. I'm not sure if they really should be capitalized (like chakra isn't)...but ...

Through the Still Night: Chapter 1: The Path of the Shinobi Shinobi must travel the path of what they know is right. A true shinobi feels the best when he ...

Hey Alice. You tried to fix me way too fast You didn’t know it was sugar glass Sorry, I really getting tired of 'suger glass'. :( Find the superglue tonight ...

Hey Jabbs. It's very repetative. I don't really like repetative. Just an opinion. It's really long... I only read about the first five verses, because I got bored of it. ...

Hey Alice. I agree with Doctor Clicky. and Kalliope about the contradictory thing. I also really don't like how you repeat the chorus way to much. It sounds a little ...

Hey Catriona. Nice job. I really, really liked it. I can actually sorta hear this. Many days I’ve wandered, many days I’ve strayed I’m about to fall off the edge, ...

Hey Alice. First off, you say that the narrator's heart loves the darknes...then you say it needs light...and then if she/he falls leave him/her there. That's kinda contradictory in my ...

It's really short and kinda strong.... I should be longer... Sorry >.< I don't really like this. ~Psychic