PsychicNinja

1)AyumiGosu17 2)Staring_at_ceiling 3)RED 4)Poltergiest 5)Baroness Ink 6)theron gaurd 7)jabber_the_hut 8)kitty15 9)Alanna 10)Layleun NOTE: That is not in order! yep. :smt049 :smt049 Timea

oh, I forgot to add on the repost. NOTE: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars one. Oopies... :oops:

Well, this would all be awesome, and giong to CA would be awesome cuz i have relatives living there! Hey, does all adults thinking that you're eighteen count? Seriously all ...

Ok. I fixed it up so it's a LOT better! NOTE: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars one. Chapter 1 “These clones are perfect.” “Yes. They will ...

Gracias, Kitty! I shall fix it..but first I think that I'll wait for other to comment too. ~Timea

Ok. Now as I'm reading over the other comments: I TOTALLY agree with Sumi! Sumi and Dynamo are both total geniuses and they are both right!! Why did you write ...

Hey! Audra told me to comment, so here! I shall crit as I go along. July 9, 2007. It was a foggy morning and two men were walking into the ...

Hey, it sounds good! I think the name 'Darc' is a bit too much pun. (It's kinda hard to crit a prologue) But it sounds great, and I'll read it! ...

hey Zoltan! Well, first I read this in your Word document, and I corrected everything I'm gonna correct here! :smt021 He was then greeted by Cere. I think it should ...

Hi Lyn! I'm sooooo sorry that I'm just getting around to this. I was kinda busy this summer, but now school started and I have more time at home, so ...

Sorry it took so long! It was written, I just didn't post it. Summer was busy! Chapter 4 “Well, that went well,” muttered Kwest as he and Lira exited the ...

Omg! Hey Jared! You wrote something! Well, besides what they said, I'll point out some grammar errors. One sunny afternoon in a forest abundant with animals a squirrel climbed up ...

What do you mean...'i know zat means'? :smt049 :smt049 Timea

Hi everyone! Alainna, my fav color is plum. My favorite place is my brain. And my favorite ice cream flavor is cherry jubilee. And Jared, by bird brain I mean ...

I've already critted this i won't repeat. Anywho, everyone go read my story!! Very muchy connected to Z's. :smt016