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Psychologicaltorment

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: It's Over, Now.

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: Insane

    I love this piece of work I think it's breathtakingly dark and otherwise bloody brilliant! You clearly have talent and have used it in this piece to really bring out ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Health Re: The Asylum of the Mind

    I absolutely love this piece. The sensory description is used so well to paint a picture of Ella's damaged mind. You have a lot of talent and have used it ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sleeper part 2

    Very good second part to the story I am again intrigued as to where it will go. You brought the characters in very well and developed them well. Also I ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sleeper

    Very gripping! The plot line is enticing and I couldn't help but keep reading until I got to the end. Great uses of suspense and language techniques to engage your ...

    Jan 7, 2016


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind