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Purple

  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Life of an Introvert

    Hey there and welcome to YWS! Purple and fellow introvert here to give you a review! Let's get started. I like the basis idea for this. The only comments I ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Refurbish the Menace

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Now, I have no clue why this is still in the green room but here I go. Whether ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Mother Swells with Sorrow

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. First off, welcome to YWS!!! I see you are fairly new. Anyways, this is a beautifully dark poem ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Evening out

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. What exactly does evening out mean to you? Clearly this concerns your job and your goals ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Confessions of a Ruby-Toed Nobody

    Hey there! Purple here for a review! How are you, friend? Anyway, let's get started. This is a nice poem about flirting with a summer-y feel that is quite freshing ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Regret

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is an interesting poem with a clear intent of repetition. Some issues with that aspect though; in ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Those Overlapping Tales

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I really like this! It's a creative way to show people as books and ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Madness

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started! This is a beautifully dark poem in just the right amount. Just a few nitpicks. "For these voices ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: Beware of the Malaceth.

    Hey there! How are you today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started! This is a fantastic piece I love the use of this monsters name how ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: We Missed Each Other

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! First off, what is this talk about pancakes?? I only want them if they're 100% real and if they are hit ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The wind and the tree

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is a very interesting poem. A frequently used theme for you is nature compared to a loved ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Mosaic

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. This is so amazing I could almost feel the chill! I actually have no problems with ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: emo poem

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I've noticed a reoccurring theme throughout all your poems which are protectors like angels and devils, and death. ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: my little guardian

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I like this concept of a guardian of hell, but I think you could definitely have expanded on ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Something Said

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. First of all, welcome to YWS! This is an interesting poem with imagery of light and ...

    Mar 2, 2014


A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon