Qoh16

AW! You left it on a cliffhanger! But this was really good. I can't wait until chapter 12!!!! Good luck and keep writing, cause I'll be waiting!!! :D Qoh16

This was a very cute story, although I personally think it should be longer, put more substance into it. This story has great potential. I did like that you included ...

Aww...this was really cute. It was a good read. But I think you should expand more, just a little bit On their friendship and such. Other than that, this was ...

I loved this. This was absolutely funny and so entertaining. I can so relate. I don't wanna get a real job btw. haha. I couldnt really find anything wrong with ...

First thing is first, you need to break up the poem into stanzas. It would be way easier to read. Other than that. I liked this. In a sad sorta ...

I don't really know what to say about this...if this is about rape like i think it is....then i really don't have anything to say. that's not a bad thing. ...

I'm sorry about you friend. I know how it feels. Onto the poem, it was amazingly beautiful. Your friend would be proud. And so should you. Great job. Good luck ...

WELL! This was absolutely AMAZING! I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will admit i sorta was watching when you would put up the next chapter ...

Uh....i really don't have anything to say about this. It is sorta disturbing. But I laughed the whole way through reading this poem. Which i think is even more disturbing. ...

This was interesting. It does seem rushed though. And you had a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Other than that. great job. Keep writing!!! But edit this first. ;) ...

This was interesting. Although, I am a bit confused as to where she is going. Is she running away? Why did she go back to the house if she was? ...

This was so interesting. I am curious as to where this will go. That's all i can say because I really didn't see anything wrong with it. I hope you ...

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! It ended. Darn I wantd so much more. The one thing I have a concern with is the end. the last lines about the Zacharias to be exact. It ...

Omg. I love this story. It is so entertaining that I am skipping doing my own Chemistry homework (XD) to read this. It seems like a cross between Harry Potter ...

Ooooo! I liked this. But sadly I don't have enough time to get all into the reviewing. So i'm going to keep it short and sweet. I think you should ...