Quinine

This is a lovely story, but I think it could be told better :) at the moment however it sounds like a official record in a office file. Here are ...

This will be a fairly short review. 1. "Get a job, a degree, get a life" seems a bit out of place, I think a rewording would improve it at ...

Nice, here's my review. The beginning seems a bit confusing, especially at first. I think some word-building would do well, rather than new readers asking questions. "It’s over, She thought. ...