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Missing Period: "the calm waves across the sea*.*" Missing Commas: "better left forgot*,* to my own" "your words remain anchors chained*,*" "i yearn for your lies at this moment*,*" Nonsensical ...

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Um...nice poem, but how is it relevant to this piece?

Thanks for pointing out these things ^-^ I figured, since I was not as familiar with these words as I am with others.

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I admit that when I was writing poems I am usually a little...aimless. Thanks for pointing out that last line, that was very helpful :) Thanks for the review!

Ok, I'll keep that in mind :)

Thanks for your review! I understand your meaning about the adjectives, but do not quite understand how their lack of utter necessity dilutes the poem. Also, it would take a ...

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