Qultur

Well snap, a Godspeed You! Black Emperor reference! Never thought I'd see one on this forum. The first one interested me, but I have to be honest and say I ...

It seems my post was overlooked. What don't you people understand in my explanation? This piece is like a monologue; "gimmick" and "label" are both abstract nouns, and cliches at ...

Hm...this wouldn't make a bad rap single.

Since I'm lazy, I'm just gonna directly copy and paste another comment I posted on a different piece, since it applies here just as well. ...because face it, if you ...

D: (aghhh I was typing out my reply when I accidentally hit the back button. I have to do this all over again) But eh...yeah, I got a little ahead ...

But see, you don't need rhyming stanzas to write a piece of poetry, so get that out of your heads, all of you who continue doing it! ------------------------------------------- I never ...

For Jesus' sake; rhyme at the end of each line does not a good poem make.

Reading this confuses me, making me nostalgic when I couldn't read and didn't understand what people said. Dizzy-dizzy-terpentine is a wicked phrase, in the case that you meant "turpentine" as ...

The themes in books are NEVER Good vs. Evil, since the characters are all in circumstantial situations putting them either in the so-called "good" or "evil" categories. To describe something ...

Heh thanks for the comments guys, I agree that the meaning isn't clear, and if I were to revise it I'd have to ground the piece more. I'd probably have ...

Ehh...I intend no offense with this statement, but I never really like pieces like this, the ones that're kind of written with medieval airs, even though it's the twenty-first century...but ...

Well, you're very good at stating things. So what about this is supposed to grab the reader; why should I care to read this? There's nothing new to this, no ...

I'm not entirely sure why BigBadBear said the piece's meter was perfect, because I didn't hear any... And well...I know it's spelled "daemon" in that Philip Pullman trilogy, but I'd ...

Heh sweet, I haven't played Morrowind in ages; this should be fun. :) Name: Tree-Fingers Race: Argonian Gender: Male Birthsign: The Thief Skills: Acrobatics, Athletics, Security, Sneak, Hand-To-Hand,

Hmm...I believe you've a classic case of DWS, Distraught Writer's Syndrome. The reason I say this is because I've written things similiar to this piece before, and they were during ...