Qultur

It seems my post was overlooked. What don't you people understand in my explanation? This piece is like a monologue; "gimmick" and "label" are both abstract nouns, and cliches at ...

Hm...this wouldn't make a bad rap single.

For Jesus' sake; rhyme at the end of each line does not a good poem make.

Heh thanks for the comments guys, I agree that the meaning isn't clear, and if I were to revise it I'd have to ground the piece more. I'd probably have ...

Heh, I wouldn't be able to say how I got the idea; my mind's a chasm, I swear. :P I get what you guys mean about the tripping of the ...

Keep it up; poetry's all about learning the subtelties of language, the sounds and images attached to the words.

Heh sorry that I came off a bit harsh; not having much of a great couple of days. Personal shiz. I'm not sure if you can delete these things, but ...