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I was immediately drawn to this as soon as I read the first sentence. This was short, but incredibly descriptive. The picture you've created here in this story is magnificent. ...

This was really, really awesome. For me, mastering the art of romance is very difficult. I struggle with the emotions between two characters and how they show them towards each ...

I like what you have here, I really do. One thing you've done extremely well is connect the emotional boundaries between the two siblings. I had a sense that Toby ...

This was quite a short piece of work here. A little to short though to tell an actual story or get any since of plot through to the reader. I ...

I really love the way you progressed the story from the beginning up until the start of the end. You had a very strong start, a solid middle, and a ...