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Raelyn

Raelyn

  • Other » General, General Re: Characters for a Potential Story

    Hey, Winny, you have really put a lot of work into Roleplaying these characters so good Job! My first impression is wow that a lot of characters. Like a lot. ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Love Part 3

    Aw, this is super sweet. I think we have all had a crush and been a little disappointed when they missed school. I like that you made this relatable yet ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 15.1

    That wolf boy should have nothing on him and yet he was continuously stealing her away from him.-okay i am sorry nathan but you haven''t really made an effort. Okay ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 14

    YES fine-a-leeeeee KATIE FIGHTS! "I need to know, Katie. I can't sit here not knowing where I stand with you. I know that we've had our differences but don't we ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 13

    "You know Nathan, for being so caring towards me, you really are a dick to your Mom." I said, my voice betraying just how angry I felt, OHHHOHOHOOO yup nathan ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: 01. The Invisible Kid

    I like your focus of realism, it really is moving. "Have you ever wondered what pulls a friend group together? " I like how you started this off with a ...

    Dec 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 12

    First of all bravo, because you used a device without auto correct. “She was his, no matter what he had to do to gain her trust.” Yeah you get the ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 11

    I am guessing this is sage. And by literal dog that means he is a werewolf. ANd for the love of all that is holy KATIE NEEDS TO LEARN TO ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.2

    “I’m sorry for your loss, Katie. It must be hard on you, Zander paused for a long moment, especially at such a time in your life. Too tired to feel ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.1

    Okay so idk why but james makes me mad. I am sorry honora I hope this isn’t mean, just as a character he really pisses me off. Is he going ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2

    Yeah my favorite vampire is back!!!!!! I love zander what left is there to say. Please, Zander. Leave her alone.” I pleaded. Something in his eyes told me that that ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Heart Shadows, Chapter 1

    OMG, SHE HAS RED HAIR!!!! I AM TEARING UP EVER! I love main characters with red hair, us redheads are never made into main characters ever! Redheads are pretty too ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 1

    WOW! Just WOW! I loved this so much. I am sorry I am so behind on your novel, but I am a book leech(well I am actually very picky, but ...

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ghazal for Her

    I love the feeling of the season changing. There is also a lot of raw emotion and I really appreciate that. It feels like your talking about the real deeper ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I want to close the window, but you have fallen asleep

    Aww, this really hit home. This is such a sweet soft concept. I think we forget the smallest little things can mean so much. Your poem is very concise yet ...

    Nov 27, 2019


Nobody wants to see the village of the happy people.
— Lew Hunter