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Raelyn

Raelyn

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Heart

    Ever light this poem is very, there are a lot of poems about hearts out here but your is new and original. I love how builds and each line relates ...

    Oct 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: The Far Stars

    Sorry I submitted a comment on accident without any words. I have my elegant moments of FAIL, you witnessed one of them. Now to your beautiful Poetry. First of all, ...

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: didn't you know i'd miss you

    Very nice job. Your melody is soft, gentle, yet sad. It has a very unique feel to it. Lyric wise it was very rich and full of meaning. It flowed ...

    Oct 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)

    First of all can I just say I am in literal love with your title!!!!!!!!!! I am writing a book that is based on the stars and I.... I don't ...

    Oct 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter Two

    Already you have built this very visual fantasy world. I loved how you talked about magic like it's a life force. Here you said: She'd heard them arguing for a ...

    Oct 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Wow! This prologue really had me going. First of all I wanted to see that I absolutely love the romance you had going in between the two characters at the ...

    Oct 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 1.2

    I have never sat down and read a full mystery book before, so my knowledge is non but I really loved this piece. The dialogue is very rich and interactive ...

    Oct 14, 2019


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