Raelyn723

I wanna READ it again!!!! I think you should have done it as a spoken word ;)

lol you tried to post it!!!!! KEEP TRYING!!!!!! XD I wanna show people how amazing it is!!!

Really? I think your the first person I've ever made cry with my it wrong to be happy right now?? Thank you so much! Yes, this is the end, there ...

Thanks! I do have the rest of the story, but all together it's really long so I didn't want to post it all at once. The characters develop more later ...

This is great :) Keep writing!!!

I know the feeling sometimes :/ sorry you feel that way. But hey, there's plenty of people willing to be your friend on here! And there's somebody out there that's ...

Short and sweet and amazing! :D I loved it!!

Thank you so much! I wasn't planning on doing much with this but maybe I will now :) thanks!

I'm no poet by any means, but I wanted to tell you that I really loved this poem. It flowed really well and was easy to read while still making ...

Wow. Seems like we have a lot in common :) I was really self-concious about posting my writing too. It got some positive feedback though and so I know exactly ...

me to :D

Great job ;) as always :D I loved it!!!! So simple and so awesome. There's a song kind of like this actually, all about the whole "you're the ______ to ...

I was thinking of having the first paragraph be third person, and the rest of it be first person. Do you think it would be too confusing or would it ...

I don't really have any suggestions to make so I won't mark this as a review, but this is amazing. I loved it and honestly a lot of it was ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'll go back and edit it soon :) I was trying to figure out how to describe him, so I'll put that in soon too :)