Raelyn723

perfect ;)

This was amazing. I absolutely loved it and felt every emotion (I think) that you poured in. I got a puppy recently so I am still up with the "I ...

Thank you!!!! I tried really hard to make the mom seem kind of selfish and in a way, evil. Glad it came across in a similar way and I'm really ...

oh gosh! I don't want any trouble ;) but thank you (again) for everything! And actually, this is just the beginning, so as the story goes on I will definitely ...

Thanks! I'll just have to figure out how to keep going with it huh? You make a good point about the descriptions :) thanks!

Thank you! I'll think about changing it to first person... that seems like a pretty good idea actually. I knew going into it that it was kind of confusing I ...

wow. You have no idea how much this means to me... I have never shared my work with more than my 1 friend... but she pushed me to post on ...

This is amazing. It drew me in and I honestly didn't even check to see how long it was (which is something I usually do before I read something). I ...