Raika

I'd probably go to the Moon because... I don't know. I feel safest there? :P

Really? I really love that game; it's my favorite! =D No wonder your story sounded kind of familiar. It has Rhen, Lars and some other facts from Aveyond's storyline. Not ...

You have a nice beginning here. I like it so far. :) But like the others said, you should probably add a bit more detail to the setting and stuff ...