Raindeer

Yeah, that could work!

Ah, I see. Hm, you could always have a "7 years later" thing or something - that could possibly work. That makes sense, I guess I just didn't pick that ...

That's great! Don't worry about it, all writers have trouble with showing and not telling. It's a hard thing to do and in most cases you got it down. :)

Thank you so much for this review! :) Very helpful for future chapters.

Oh, no, they were great! ^-^ Just think they could use a tad bit of work (in fact I liked how the senses were used- like the 'ding' of the ...

Chapter 13, chapter 13 *strokes chin* Yes, yes, I can wait. xD

Thank you so much! ^-^ Yeah, I have more chapters written, but I didn't want to fill the green room haha. Thanks again!

Thank you so much! c:

Yep :P

She's not a daughter of Zeus, ehe ^-^ Thanks! Two good points, thank you for the input! c:

Thank you so much!

Yep, okay! Definitely my fault xD I've just been so busy and can't keep up with some things.

I am enjoying this so far! The protagonist seems interesting. Mind tagging me for future chapters? c:

Creepily enough, this is the message I got after I wrote my review: You know, I wonder how they'll write reviews in the future... will they use special future technology? ...

Thank you so much! I'll definitely work on spicing up my description ^-^ Thanks again