Raindeer

Yes, that might be good. Good luck! ^.^

Oh. Didn't count as a review. Oh well.

I'm marking this as a review, I hope that's okay. Okay, mistake time! (Besides punctuations) "Hate me if you must, Yukio please take her inside and make sure she gets ...

Nope, I actually don't know any Bobs. XD. And sure! I'll help you, one sec....

Also, if you need review tips, you can check out the 'will review for food' section in the forums. There is lots of tricks on how to make a review ...

Really? If you review a lot, you get a lot of points. Don't post works constantly, maybe one a week. Then you can have points saved up. And to be ...

"Such a treasure beyond compare" I don't know. :P I feel like that's a little overused maybe? I'm really not all that sure.

Awh. Just earn them back from reviewing XD Okay, I'm ready to read more :D

You're welcome! I know, don't worry. Description is ALWAYS the hardest for me. As well as lengths of chapters. Haha. Anywas, hope I helped :)

Oh. Weird. I'll go review that in a little while.

It's okay! Some people just aren't good at grammar ;) And you're very welcome, I'm glad I could help :D

Oh, whoops >.< I just saw your message about not minding the grammar. Silly me... Sorry!

You're welcome :)

:) Okay! And you're welcome.

That was amazing. :D