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Raiyelle

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Soul in Bondage

    Thanks. I intentionally left out a lot more scenery for I like my readers to imagine where it's taken place. I used the word "wilderness" but it can be taken ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Falling Hard...

    Good job on the poem. I know it's hard sometimes to compose a poem the way you had to. But definitely fix your misspell of "turn".

    Mar 18, 2009


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart