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Hello dove. Well done. This is a very whimsical piece. I love how simple and vague it sounds at first, but if you read it again, you see underlying meaning ...

Hey doll! This is a really good piece, and what makes it so great is the different points of view. Whenever I read a work about suicide, it is always ...

To put it simply, this is short, sweet, and to the point (no pun intended). I really like how you focus on moving forward from cutting. You have a reason ...

Hey Max! First of all I must say your vocabulary is very good. Good vocabulary says a lot about a writer. One thing you need to work on however is ...

Hello dove! Wow. Just give me a minute here to process this. That is absolutely beautiful. Your imagery is suberb. Your word choice is wonderful. When it comes to any ...

Hey there. I liked it. I really thought it was clever how you didn't give the characters names. It helped to make the story a little anonymous. As far as ...

Morning dove! Good job. I think that you were able to get across the message very well, the extreme competition of being a dancer. However, I think that the peom ...

Oh, wow. This is breathtaking. I'm at a loss for words. I love the way the words flow while you read. The piece is so whimsical. It's sad, without being ...

Hey there dove, Good job. I really like the dark undertones of the poem. There are many different pieces out in the world from the hurting person's perspective, and I ...

Hey there dove, So I really like this. I think it has potential to become more then a short story. This brief section would make a good prologue. Where as ...

Hey zoehuman! One of the most important concepts of writing is imagery, using words to paint a picture in the mind of another. I absolutly loved the imagery in this ...

This is really good. I really like how you played the story out in the end, with Harry having Ingrid tell him about her life. It was touching and emotional ...

Your poem is great. It has the essence of being a dream, a bittersweet remembrance. Although the poem appears to be sweet, it has underlying tones of sadness and regret. ...

Well done! Although it was a a very classic plot line, your story was very oringinal. You need to be careful of grammatical errors. There were several times that I ...

Well done. What I loved most about your poem was the fact that you do not know what happened to his love. There is a level of mystery to it ...