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It is a beautiful poem. I noticed that you used the word 'alot' in your poem. I think what you mean is 'a lot' because the word alot means to ...

Well done. I enjoyed the fact that you portrayed the candle's warmth and light in different way. I also liked the question you asked at the end. It tied up ...

Your poem is beautiful. It has a whimsical feel to it especially if you read it aloud. The two emotions in it, sadness and love, really play off of each ...