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:) Thanks. I tend to do that alot even in real life conversations. My moms like yeah yeah I know already. Thanks for the feed back :)

Thank you very much :)

All done, nice piece :) Anyone up and running for a speedy review????

Blood runs down my cheek. You are good with description, and I see that later on in the story, but I need more description here. This is the first sentence ...

Thanks so much. :) I should take more time for detail and showing things. Its just that im excited and want to get it all out as soon as possible ...

Great! :) Thanks guys!

I love your description. I shall pick it up and read it :) Thanks

You know you want one :)

Thanks again for such an awesome review. im glad you like the story. About the realistic problem i think it's realistic because when I was nine I was hit by ...

Can you please review my romantic fiction piece titled Let Me Love You please and thank you -Tiffany :)

Well' I have. Im sure it's just a typo but there's an apostroph after well and there shouldn't be one. :) But never could I have imagined that I would ...

Thank you :)

Thank you. See i really liked this book because of the style of writing so if I read Speaker of Death the style of writing will be different? If so ...

*Warning: It is rated pg-13 because once again the charcater Gary has a dream about Isabella* Chapter four When Gary got out of the shower he put on grey sweat ...

Wow, just breath taking. I love this chapter because it gives much suspense before the actually event. But you also do alot of telling. Instead of saying she felt at ...