RatchetWriter

Wow, I didn't know this would get much response. :lol: Well I didn't really think long on a name, I guess it IS a pretty nasty name! :lol:

Thanks Grif, I thought about it for a while, I think you are right. I guess I just imagined big ships with banks of oars... isn't that what tiremes are? ...

Thanks for the comments! Very encouraging, I wasn't sure that I improved at all. I'll be sure to correct that mistake too. Next section coming soon!

Haha, I didn't think of that. Well I'll have to change that. *sighs audibly and once again goes to edit*

Thanks for the crits! (I'll take more :D ) Okay, first of all, I named my character because I liked the idea. It's pronounced Hare-es-stin, not Hare-stin, if that's what ...

Thanks for the crit! I am feeling kind of sheepish. :oops: I forgot to read my own story through. Yes, it is choppy I agree, some of it I wrote ...