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RavenAngelique

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: warning may offend- Brotherly Love

    This piece is rather powerful and I loved the rhyming .However...There was one spot where the rhyming was off just a little off. "She hums to herself as she watches ...

    Mar 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Girl in the Window (Edited)

    I liked it.Intersting and each line makes you want to read more and know more.Although I do agree,the rhyming does seem a little forced and stanzas would make is easier ...

    Mar 26, 2008


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