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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter one- Tainted Perfection

    I have to say, I really liked this a lot.. It flows pretty well and I liked the way you described the demon! The slight errors have already been pointed ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Desperate Desires

    This is great and yes, the only errors Nightly already pointed out. Keep at it, this is awesome and I'm hooked. :)

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Exposed Chapter 1

    Mika was never one for clubs. Especially since they were filled with brain-dead drunks like the one that had been pressing for her attention for a while now. "Hey, sweetie," ...

    Jun 27, 2011


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings