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Re: Chapter one- Tainted Perfection
I have to say, I really liked this a lot.. It flows pretty well and I liked the way you described the demon! The slight errors have already been pointed ...
Jun 27, 2011
I have to say, I really liked this a lot.. It flows pretty well and I liked the way you described the demon! The slight errors have already been pointed ...
Jun 27, 2011
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