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Re: DON'T mourn my death!
This poem has a really fun and well thought out theme. The way you executed what you were trying to convey was great and each line read super well! Death ...
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Re: you were easy to listen to and hard to hear
This was super creative! I loved it! I have never seen a poem written in this format, but its makes sense and is super effective. At first it is a ...
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Re: The Art of Deception.
This story was very unique! Starting off with a mystery, leading into a possibility, then right into a big reveal is all super fun to read. It was a very ...
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Re: you are surely not a goose or you would know exactly what i'm saying
For a serious review now, I felt that this was more of a philosophical poem than anything else. Things like, "Every goose is going somewhere, Sometimes there is no question, ...
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Re: The silent struggle
This poem is beautifully written! You did a great job in conveying the title of the piece towards the writing. Its clear what your story is and your word choice ...
Feb 4, 2023