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Above and above...agreed. x3 Now I am hoping that you didn't mean what I think you meant but then again that would mean I have a gutter-mind . Hopefully you ...

Hi! You requested a review from me, which I probably should have done then, but. xD Anyways, I liked this. However, the excessive use of the word "baby" irks me ...

Again, sorry I'm so lazy and taking so long to review. Anyway, I finished my review on your other song, and unlike that song, I think the anger and swearing ...

...Asking me to review this was...well, I can't review this. It's actually good. xD *clicks like* You had some spelling and grammar issues up there, but Scar already pointed them ...

Crest, the site sometimes does that, which is why it's important to put dashes (-) between each stanza in separation. It makes it easier to read. Anyway, simply reading the ...

I'm not going to go al big picky like I did on Kill the Messenger, but I agree with anianaira. I can never stress enough how much lyrics define the ...

Praying on the dreams of others I believe you mean "preying"? sucking her victims dry. I love her she hates me. I feel as though there should be something linking ...

'Allo there! :3 Overall, I agree with sealegs. This seems more like an ending to a song than the song itself. To elaborate a little more on that, you're using ...

Em looks EXACTLY how I imagined her! That being said, Skype. xD Oh, and a few other people, like Warrior Princess (whose avatars are her own pictures) and Bondgirl007 (again, ...

Hello Alpha! I'm here to review, as requested. I'm warning you now, I don't hold back. I am harsh-ish. As harsh as I can be without beating myself up about ...

Alright! First off, hello Nikki! Second, I am currently too busy (loaded with homework) to review. Later, I'll edit in any comments/remarks/suggestions/rip-apart-reviewness I may have for you. a time

Snoink, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this. The wording, the imagery, everything. My review is unneeded here, especially because...well, look above at all the other thorough reviews, ...

I’ll stand my ground Even after the battle Cuz 'Cause that’ll make me feel stronger Even if it’s not much longer I live my life day to day In the ...

[VERSE 1] I don’t like people, That’s just a fact. So you must be an alien, Or maybe just a yak. The rhyming seems forced here. Try to think of ...

This is a good poem! The holocaust sucked, I agree. There are parts where your rhyming seems forced and the rhythm needs a little smoothing out. Most of your periods ...