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RealSadhours296

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The King That Could Not Rise From the Floor

    I really, really liked this! God I love the main character; the girl in this story. She seems like such a fiery spirit and I'm a huge sucker for female ...

    Jul 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Loving you, me, and us

    Each Haiku sounds so very, very pretty! I applaud you for that and your creativity in portraying your theme! I will say that I don't think the first two haiku ...

    Jul 21, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: how many bruises can you hold inside you (draft 2)

    Lovely poem that I can relate to greatly. Depression is a whirlpool of frantic emotions and endless self-hatred. Luckily for me, I managed to get the help I need and ...

    Jul 21, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 2

    Loved this chapter, and I can't wait to meet the angel Fyn will travel with! You've done a really good job of displaying the power and glory of the higher-ups ...

    Jul 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Awakening Chapter 2: Burn

    I loved this chapter, indeed I did! Blake caring for his mom is so, so sweet. I'm assuming she's not married (unless I missed a detail somewhere that said otherwise), ...

    Jul 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 1: Chill

    I'm really interested in this creation you are working on and definitely want to read more of it! I really loved how you introduced Blake's ability to see ghosts! I ...

    Jul 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I'm in literal pain mama,

    Your poem is really raw and powerful. The title summarizes the poem nicely, and and contents really immerse me in the feeling. I do feel that at certain points, my ...

    Jun 21, 2021
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Pride Month: Definitions and Explanations for (Almost) Everything!

    Thank you for writing this article for pride month! I think it's good for individuals to be properly informed of the terms the LGBTQ+ community uses regardless of their opinions! ...

    Jun 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 1

    I was really intrigued by the title of this project, and found the first chapter. I have to say, I love this already! Your descriptions and your imagery are detailed, ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Just Imagine

    I really, really liked the imagery here. It's not too detailed to where I easily zone out to it, and then forget what I'm reading (this happens to me whenever ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    This poem hit a spot in my heart, as someone who has gone through a break up this year. Although my situation does not align too much with the story ...

    Jun 11, 2021


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster