RedHead

You know what? I really don't think it was that rushed. Lovely descriptions! It's been so long since I read a story that just sucked me into it, but yours ...

I was sick of listening to the beats of my heart. I mean, sure, it was nice to know it was there, but the bip! bip! bip! was really getting ...

Happiness is summer, or so I tend to think Sometimes, when the cicadas finally go to sleep. Summer is hot sun, grazing my skin and sinking its teeth, through clothes ...

Hahahaha, that's so cute! So true! This was a refreshing read, thank you! My favorite lines: My sister gave me a notepad, And I'll tell you what she said: 'Keep ...

Plain Old Jane You should have never gotten serious about her; she's a plain old Jane, sitting in the corner in all the classes, nibbling on an apple at lunch ...

AWWW, I like it so much! You had a firm theme all throughout the poem, which was very clear and added a lot. I really can't find much wrong with ...

Um, hi! :) I'm not really used to reviewing things, so I hope this helps! Okay, so here it goes: I liked this. I mean, not at first. At first ...