RedMoon

Ok, NOW, so... I've read all of this so far, and let me tell you, this was great. I really like this. I've often thought about crosses between my favorite ...

I'm sorry that I took so long to get to this, but I haven't found time to get on, or I forgot when I did. So, finally, here is the ...

First off, let me tell you what I love about this. I really love your style, or at least, the style that you used in this story. You didn't make ...

Okay, so this is a really good first chapter. You got into the story really well. It was a little too fast for my taste. You may want to slow ...

Hey, this is really interesting. I liked your style of writing and your ideas. Once I had an idea to come up with a story like this one, but I ...

Okay. So, good story. I really liked your plot. My favorite part was when she finds she is the key and has to escape the place with a total stranger. ...

Hey, this is really good. At first I thought it was too short, but when I read through the whole thing, it was actually okay. I liked the description and ...

Hallarious!!! I had tears in my eyes from laughing so hard. You have a great writing style. I saw nothing wrong with your short story grammar wise or story wise. ...

Hey, Starleene, your story was very moving. I actually could feel the emotions like I was the girl whose mother had been shot, like I had lost my own mother. ...

Hey, Ahmad, I finally got the chance to read chapters 3-6. I'll review what I can, but it won't be detailed (I don't have the time). Really it will pretty ...

This is a really good story. I like it a lot and can't wait to hear the rest of it. The only problem I can see in the whole story ...

Oh. . . my. . . gosh. I couldn't take my eyes off the screen! This story is amazing! :). I don't think I would change a thing about it. ...

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. This poem is amazing. I don't usually read poetry and if I do, I don't read the poem all the way through. It's ...

I like this. Every story should have a good balance of ingredients (I won't list them all right now) and I say that you have got it all. I didn't ...

I like this. It's got a good plot. Plus you don't say much about what happened before. Mystery is always good in a story. Well, most of the time anyway. ...