RedMoon

I have a question, and I would like your honest opinion on this. "She picked up her fork and played with the food on her tray. Today's lunch was salisbury ...

Oh wow! I don't know why, but this hit me like a ton of bricks. I love this so much. And since it's Christmas, I think I just have to ...

Actually, Scree is pronounced exactly the way it is spelled and Scrio is "Scree-oh". And Kyri actually started off as a female. I'm thinking of changing it back. I was ...

Thanks for the review. I know that my piece needs a lot of work, especially this one. Rest assured that I will get a little into the minions' lives and ...

Thanks for the review. And I meant "and" when I said "Unless this has something to do with your father 'as' me." *Sheepish grin* I guess I need to look ...

Tunnels!!! I knew that holes was the wrong word to use, but I couldn't remember what that other word was. Well, tunnels was it, so thanks. And I know that ...

Thanks for the review. It means a lot that you guys like it so much. I will make sure to go back and edit. And TheMessenger, this is the prologue, ...

Oops, I forgot to say that this was a review. Oh well.

Wow, great story. I really liked your prologue (it is a prologue, right?). You described everything to the perfect point, leaving just info to tell the reader what's sort of ...

Me likey. This is a great poem, and though I don't know much about poems, I do know a great writer when I see one. Great job. Keep writing.

NOTE: Note that I have never written a poem before today. If it is horible feel free to chuck it out the window. :D.

I edited my work. :)

On second thought, Sureal, your first comment makes a lot of sense. I've been thinking about it and human nature. I guess that she would probably be more concerned about ...

NOTE: This story is one of the works of my sisters, the first couple paragraphs (or whatever) being written by me. She wants to know what you all think so ...

Thank you for the positive words. I worked hard to get this one just right.