RedRozeNinja13

I had written a reply-but it was too long and hence was not posted, nor did it save. So I shall, perhaps, tell you later. But let me just condense ...

You haven't listened to a word I've said. Well then, good day to you madam.

Bul.Ly. I wonder how many other people you've torn down. I just found out today that this particular piece is being published in a literary magazine, a few hours after ...

One- if you're going to complain, don't continually express how DISAPPOINTED you are in my writing, you didn't have to read it. 'You try too hard' actually, love, I didn't ...

I use ellipses to demonstrate Aura's Halting sort of thinking pattern- if it bothers you I could stop? Thank you for reviewing ^ ^ I always look forward to feedback ...

Thanks so much- this is actually a short story based off of one of my novel characters that, even in the future, is still very much a child at heart. ...

I don't really consider them run-on sentences so much, but that's probably just my writing style and the way it appears in the document I write it on. I'm glad ...

No offense to you or anything- but you may want to rethink your way of reviewing o.o especially on a website where points are determined by characters, copy and pasting ...

It's no problem ^ ^ I rather like poetry that brings an emotional connection to poetry that doesn't pertain to me at all o.o otherwise I feel kind of left ...

You're so welcome ^ ^ And it's ok to laugh at me, I'm a ditzy random blonde- I like to make people laugh ^ ^

Ps: Even though Aura is a rather serious character- you will find quite a bit of humor in this story, I hope you continue to read- thank you for taking ...

Ps: Even though Aura is a rather serious character- you will find quite a bit of humor in this story, I hope you continue to read- thank you for taking ...

I JUST REALIZED THERE WAS A TYPO IN MY LAST COMMENT AND THERE'S NO EDIT OPTION SO I CAN FIX IT!!! NYOOOOOOOOOOO >

Sorry XD My reviews are just as scatterbrained as m thought process ^ ^

Well, much of the thing you've pointed out are in fact explained later in the story. (They do have light- but never sunlight. They have moonlight, and Aura explains the ...