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  • Diary Entry 1 *rough draft*

    I am but the remaining pulp of a beaten, abused, abandoned, starving girl. This house is dark and it smells of dust and dogs. The amber, square inch tiles are ...

    4 min read
  • Butterfly Shaped Stains

    Emotions, caterpillars metamorphing,ever so slightly always changing.Can't help but let them fly,and as they change let myself cry.-I'm never going to let it all go,and never know it has to ...

    1 min read
  • Inadequate

    Everything I am and everything I will be revolves around the capability to write this poetry.-Oh, the clatter I create in my pitiful artistic state. If only I was more ...

    1 min read
  • My Bright Red Scream 2

    It’s been seven months since the woman who birthed me crumbled my family’s foundation, destroyed my home’s illusion of sanctuary, and shattered the maternal bond between us. Work leaves little ...

    5 min read
  • My Bright Red Scream 3 ***PG 13 for language***

    You can read an update version of this at post648355.html#p648355. It's now a piece in a novel I'm writing.It’s against the rules. But, Dad has to be home for rules ...

    9 min read
  • Dakota's Diary, Chapter *New Edits 5/11/10*

    A note to my readers: I know it's long, but I think you'll enjoy it! Keep in my that in my original the diary entries are in a different font. ...

    15 min read
  • Dakota's Diary Chapter 2 (Part 1)

    A note to my readers: I'm splitting this chapter in half because it's so long We were sitting in the parking lot behind my apartment building in his black Ford ...

    7 min read
  • Dispersed Doubts

    Upon our first touch of lips,all the doubts stowed in my mind,your skin confined to my finger's tips,but still my doubts to hide behind.-As I hid you divulged,with each word ...

    1 min read
  • Bloody Tears

    When I cry I shed more blood than tears, when I'm scared I show more anger than fears. But by your side I show more love, than anything I've listed ...

    1 min read
  • Dakota's Diary Chapter 2 (part 2)

    This is the second half of chapter 2 in the novel I'm working on. I post it in segments because I know it's long and long pieces don't get many ...

    10 min read
  • Dakota's Diary Pg1, Ch1 *Edited*

    This is the first page of the first chapter in a novel I'm writing. It's fictional but all based on a true story. I appreciate all opinions!My wedding was a ...

    3 min read
  • Dakota's Diary, entry from chapter 3 (13+ for language)

    "Dakota's Diary" is a novel I'm working on that contains diary entries from the main character's childhood. This entry is from chapter three, which is not yet complete. Dakota is ...

    7 min read


Surround yourself with people who are serious about being writers, and who will tell you, ‘Hey—you can do better than this.’ Who will be critical of your work, but also supportive. And who will not be competitive in a negative way.
— Isabel Quintero